故事:歌詞裡
最近聽了很多hip hop,(多謝SGB=D)所以也想來饒饒舌. 特別喜歡那些獎大道理的饒舌了...不過第一次寫詞,我已寫故事來練習.
第二段歌詞寫亂了,有點不順,前後分開錄有點合不起來.
美洲這裡今天是情人節,所以不算遲到.
Verse1:
Sixty nine days later, the wind turned around, heading down south
Taking in the warm tune, the warm light, the warmer sun,
But never return leaving me hugging myself against the cold night
November sixteen, did the story begin for me fight against the cold loveless prophecy
The hope was high and everything was fine,
Then winter struck like meteorite into our territory of love
Our love was shriveling parching dying crumbling into the worst pile of worthless
Sitting there lifeless, in it was madness
I felt just the utmost sense of loveless
How it all happened was a mysterious event,
What was there to be a critical triggering element?
My emotion was there burning over and over again,
Doing my best just to keep my flooding tears at bay
Your love was fading I could see it easy
cus it was obvious enough to observe without scrutiny
I thought it was all a bad dream and I would wake up within a shorting
but the pain was pure as it cut through my heart beat
In the destined night I was off the cliff, resigning myself to my fate unwillingly
Making myself feel sorry.
After all I was the one who brought loveless to reality.
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Verse 2:
Uh oh, no, it’s already too late,
my words have already made you turn further away.
What I have done was not my intent,
I couldn’t take the pain and was driven by craze.
What can I do in order to redeem my mistake
I know I have had my chance but failed to win the game.
I thought I could be like what Marilyn Monroe sang
Be through with love and never fall again
But I was wrong and could only regret
my stupidity that broke my sanity.
Maybe I should think that at least you did love me for a little bit
Hope you did not take me out and play make believe.
I probably just screwed up and u didn’t wanna hurt me.
But I only wanted truth, not being blindfolded and thrown in freeze
Well u never lied to me cuz u told me everything with your moves,
I saw it in you
Giving me hell so I see it true with my own eyes what a kook could deserve.
Yet its so hard to accept the truth
Meaning of life given then soon be returned to my dear you
after fragility of human mind tested in the crude.
(不合之處)
I wish to go back to the original spot but don’t know how cuz I am lost.
Can I put my trust in the dark then expect all frost thawed to liquid and exhaust with hope that shines ever so hot.
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Maybe not.
押韵机械人
nice beat,man...big up!!!