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<P><STRONG><FONT size=3>回到單純吉他，先不論歌詞加略過副歌激昂部份，這首歌輕淡旋律有讓人心情沉靜的力量,跟著哼著哼著...讓人可以安心睡去....咦...搖籃催眠曲...喜歡...</FONT></STRONG></P>

<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'MS PMincho'">Hey , I like this folk ballad better than<A href="javascript:;"><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="COLOR: windowtext; FONT-FAMILY: 'MS PMincho','serif'; TEXT-DECORATION: none; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; text-underline: none">三部曲</SPAN></A>.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </SPAN>The sad melody makes a person feel depressed after a few listens.<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'MS PMincho'">You probably need to expand on the lyrics though .... otherwise the song becomes very repetitive when <SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp;</SPAN>the melody/lyric repeats itself every 1.50min…<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 'MS PMincho'">You seem to raise your voice when you<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </SPAN>sing the words “<A title=終於說出口 href="http://www.kkbox.com.tw/funky/web_info/kp1M9k5lFORDqZ600OxQ008l.html#5"><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="COLOR: windowtext; FONT-FAMILY: 'MS Mincho'; TEXT-DECORATION: none; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; text-underline: none">但是</SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="COLOR: windowtext; FONT-FAMILY: 'Batang','serif'; TEXT-DECORATION: none; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'MS PMincho'; text-underline: none">說</SPAN><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="COLOR: windowtext; FONT-FAMILY: 'MS PMincho','serif'; TEXT-DECORATION: none; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; text-underline: none">不出口</SPAN></A>” which is at odds with the tone of the entire song…Perhaps you can consider using a softer tone for those words.</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="mso-fareast-font-family: SimSun"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>

<P>很痛...<IMG src="http://tw.streetvoice.com/images/faceicon/face_type2_10.gif"; border=0 mce_src="http://tw.streetvoice.com/images/faceicon/face_type2_10.gif"></P>;

<P>很喜欢副歌一开始的部份，期待你的重新犏曲喔，加油！</P>

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Yeh, 2nd one, too!&nbsp; Haha...

Yeh, finally 1st one!&nbsp; Hehe...